There's a list of writing tips making a splash, purportedly from the pen of David Mamet. Patrick Jong Taylor confirms that it's real...
Earlier today, I was checking my Facebook newsfeed and saw multiple posts about an alleged fax from David Mamet, apparently addressed to his writing staff while working on his now-cancelled CBS Delta Force drama, The Unit. The letter is replete with classically Mamet-esque phrasing and attitude. Normally, I take such articles with a grain of salt (it's just too easy to fake such a story), but while scanning the document, I realized I had seen it before...
Several years ago, I was a screenwriter's assistant for a writer on The Unit. My time working for that writer coincided with his tenure on The Unit for just a few weeks, as he left to pursue other opportunities, but I still have the email that he forwarded to me, with the subject line 'Mamet's writing rules'.
So, RedShark readers, I can indeed confirm that the following letter is the real deal. I have converted the ALL-CAPS original to something less shouty, fixed a few typos, and changed the underlined portions to italics, because it's what we prefer. Enjoy.
To the writers of The Unit.
As we all learn how to write this show, a recurring problem becomes clear.
The problem is this: to differentiate between drama and non-drama. Let me break-it-down now.
Everyone in creation is screaming at us to make the show clear.
We are tasked with, it seems, cramming a shitload of information into a little bit of time.
Our friends, the penguins, think that we, therefore, are employed to communicate information -- and, so, at times, it seems to us.
The audience will not tune in to watch information.
You wouldn't, I wouldn't. No one would or will.
The audience will only tune in and stay tuned to watch drama.
What is drama?
Drama, again, is the quest of the hero to overcome those things that prevent him from achieving a specific, acute, goal.
So: We, the writers, must ask ourselves of every scene these three questions:
- Who wants what?
- What happens if he doesn't get it?
- Why now?
The answers to these questions is litmus paper.
Apply them, and their answers will tell you if the scene is dramatic or not.
If the scene is not dramatically written, it will not be dramatically acted.
There is no magic fairy dust which will make a boring, useless, redundant, or merely informative scene after it leaves your typewriter. You, the writers, are in charge of making sure every scene is dramatic.
This means all the "little" expositional scenes of two people talking about a third, this bushwah (and we all tend to write it on the first draft) is less than useless, should it finally, god forbid, get filmed.
If the scene bores you when you read it, rest assured it will bore the actors, and will, then, bore the audience, and we're all going to be back in the breadline.
Someone has to make the scene dramatic. It is not the actor's job (the actor's job is to be truthful). It is not the director's job. His or her job is to film it straightforwardly and remind the actors to talk fast.
It is your job.
Every scene must be dramatic. That means: the main character must have a simple, straightforward, pressing need which impels him or her to show up in the scene.
This need is why they came. It is what the scene is about. Their attempt to get this need met will lead, at the end of the scene, to failure -- this is how we know the scene is over. It, this failure, will, then, of necessity, propel us into the next scene.
All these attempts, taken together, will, over the course of the episode, constitute the plot.
Any scene thus, which does not both advance the plot, and stand alone (that is, dramatically, by itself, on its own merits) is either superfluous, or incorrectly written.
Yes but yes but yes but, you say: what about the necessity of writing in all that information?"
And I respond "figure it out" -- any dickhead with a bluesuit can be (and is) taught to say "make it clearer", and "I want to know more about him".
When you've made it so clear that even this bluesuited penguin is happy, both you and he or she will be out of a job.
The job of the dramatist is to make the audience wonder what happens next. Not to explain to them what just happened, or to suggest to them what happens next.
Any d*ckhead, as above, can write, "but, Jim, if we don't assassinate the Prime Minister in the next scene, all Europe will be engulfed in flames."
We are not getting paid to realize that the audience needs this information to understand the next scene, but to figure out how to write the scene before us such that the audience will be interested in what happens next.
Yes, but, yes but yes but, you reiterate.
And I respond figure it out.
How does one strike the balance between witholding and vouchsafing information? That is the essential task of the dramatist. And the ability to do that is what separates you from the lesser species in the blue suits.
Figure it out.
Start, every time, with this inviolable rule:
The scene must be dramatic. It must start because the hero has a problem, and it must culminate with the hero finding him or herself either thwarted or educated that another way exists.
Look at your log lines. Any logline reading "Bob and Sue discuss..." is not describing a dramatic scene.
Please note that our outlines are, generally, spectacular. The drama flows out between the outline and the first draft.
Think like a filmmaker rather than like a functionary. Because, in truth, you are making the film. What you write, they will shoot.
Here are the danger signals.
Any time two characters are talking about a third, the scene is a crock of shit.
Any time any character is saying to another "as you know", that is, telling another character what you, the writer, need the audience to know, the scene is a crock of sh*t.
Do not write a crock of sh*t. Writing a ripping three, four, seven minute scene which moves the story along, and you can, very soon, buy a house in Bel Air and hire someone to live there for you.
Remember you are writing for a visual medium. Most television writing, ours included, sounds like radio. The camera can do the explaining for you. Let it. What are the characters doing -- literally. What are they handling, what are they reading, what are they watching on television, what are they seeing.
This is a skill. No one does it naturally. You can train yourselves to do it, but you need to start.
I close with one thought: look at the scene and ask yourself "is it dramatic?" Is It essential? Does it advance the plot?"
If any answer is "no" write it again or throw it out.
If you've got any questions, call me up.
Mamet Santa Monica 19 Oct 05
(It is not your responsibility to know the answers, but it is your, and my, responsibility to know and to ask the right questions over and over. Until it becomes second nature. I believe they are listed above.)